Saturday, June 1, 2013

Update and Shit, Bro

So I kno;w I haven't been blogging lately; probably because I forgot that I even had a blog (And a Youtube channel). But I finished accomplishing a great feat this May. I entered a writing contest last year that's world-wide and accounts for over 1 billion (7th and 8th grade) entrants. I made it to the world competition, alogn with my friends Steven and Megan and my girlfriend Mackenzie. We were somewhere in the top 750 out of 1 billion.

After the 3 initial rounds of writing they called up the top 54 for each grade. Sadly I didn't make it there (omfg. a judge called my fantasy story unrealistic).

Anyways, I'm thinking about self-publishing my novel Night Watch with Lulu, on paperback and eBook (Although I really love hardback books).

So, anyways, I will be blogging regularly now.

Tuesday, April 30, 2013

I WON CAMP NANOWRIMO

holy fucking shit brah

i won

camp

nano

wrimo

i can't

no words

i leave you with these:



Thursday, March 28, 2013

Novelling Music.

I like to listen to music when I write. Usually, I have a small playlist on my computer with some really good songs by some really good artists. I usually listen to indie music and alternative rock. Here's what my writing playlist currently consists of:





I have some Imagine Dragons. My favorite song by them is Demons.




Then I have some Awolnation. I really like their song It's Not Your Fault.





And the third band I have on my playlist is Of Monsters and Men. I like their song Mountain Sound.






Have a nice day!

Camp NaNoWriMo

Okay. Camp NaNo is only three days away. I am on spring break until the third of April, which is my last day on break. This gives me a whole bunch of free time the first three days. But on the other hand, I will be taking a school field trip to Washington D.C. on the ninth and I won't get back until the 12th. I'm not sure if I'm allowed to bring my laptop or anything, so I guess that's where the issue begins.

Another issue is that I just started outlining this new writing project, it's called Night Watch, and I really like it. I am losing love for my previous idea, though, because of all of the research and stuff that goes into writing a historical fiction novel. But I don't want to change ideas right before NaNo because 1. I've already told my American History teacher that I'm going to be writing about a slaveholder shortly before and during the civil war, and 2, I have already written the first 3,000 words of Night Watch.

Now you see my predicament. I could just write 333 more words on the second day, with none on the first. Hmm... maybe...

But I'm afraid that could count as cheating....

I don't know.

Tuesday, March 26, 2013

World Building

I am going to put everything on hold--The Risen, The Parallels, Don't Look Down, everything--to work on a new, more serious, book. It's going to be called Night Watch, and it's going to be epic.

Anyways, it's a fantasy novel. And with fantasy novels come intricate worlds. With intricate worlds comes the whole process of building that intricate world. With that, comes work.

Okay, so, although most world building doesn't take much effort, you still need to do it. I am amazing at world building (in my opinion) and here's what I know:

You should always have a set of natural laws and compare those to our world.

You should always have how your world looks in contrast to ours (moons, suns, plants, etc.).

You should list the type of people that live in this world (races, good/bad).

You should also add any additional facts about this world.

and that's it!

Tuesday, March 19, 2013

The Fault in Our Stars book review

Okay, let's just say, this book didn't make me all-out cry and shit. It made me depressed, which is about as far as a sad book gets me.

Also, this was much more than a love story. It's a story about life and death and stuff. I had to stop reading when Augustus admitted that he had cancer again to her (Hazel). It was too much for me. I was in study hall and I just couldn't take crying in school.

This book was amazing. I can't even explain how good it was (is). I have never read a book in two days before, but now I have. I feel like my life is complete now, and that no matter what, no piece of literature will ever be better than The Fault in Our Stars.

Sunday, March 17, 2013

FUCKING IDEA

OMG I JUST GOT THIS SUPER AWESOME AMAZING IDEA FOR THIS SUPER AWESOME AMAZING STORY AND IT'S SO AWESOME THIS WHOLE POST IS JUST GOING TO BE ONE LONG RUN-ON SENTENCE WITHOUT ANY PUNCTUATION AND IN ALL CAPS

K K

OKAY SO THE STORY TAKES PLACE IN A SORT OF FUTURISTIC-APOPCALYPTIC  WORLD WHERE THERE ARE THESE DOPPLEGANGERS CALLED "THE PARALLELS" (WHICH IS ACTUALLY THE TITLE OF THE BOOK) WHO COME FROM A UNIVERSE PERFECT AND ARE TRYING TO MAKE OUR UNIVERSE LIKE THEIRS SO THEY ARE WAGING WAR ON US THROUGH AN INTER-DEMENSIONAL PORTALS THAT INDIVIDUAL PEOPLE CAN OPEN AT ANY TIME AND AT ANY PLACE THROUGH A SPECIAL DEVICE THAT IS ON THEIR WRISTS CALLED AN 'INDIVIDUAL PARALLEL TRANSPORTATION UNIT' THAT LETS THE USER/PERSON GO THROUGH THEIR OWN  DIMENSION AND OURS

SO YEAH

I HAVE NO IDEA WHAT I AM GOING TO DO FOR CAMP NANOWRIMO.

Wednesday, March 6, 2013

Camp NaNo Outlining: Outlining

(I did have pictures for this, but it wouldn't post with them.)

Here I will show you how I outline, what program, and my process.

I usually start outlining by writing a synopsis. This year, I did it differently. I wrote a synopsis and an excerpt for my description of the novel on the camp nano site (not that it made much of a difference). Anyhow, this should usually be the first step in writing for anybody--whether it's an official summary or if it's just "oh, I wanna write a book about a guy and a girl who fall in love."

I put more thought into mine.

I sit down, type out what I want to happen so I can get a general idea of what I want to put into my book. If you click the picture, I'm sure it will enlarge, you can read my summary.

When I outline, I usually do the Main Characters second. This includes all frequently-featured people, a brief summary of their lives and their personality, and their names. I add onto this list as I outline and I feel like I've added more main characters.

Third, I write the outline of each chapter. On this, I put the date because that's what day it is. This novel is going to take place over the course of three years, so I am going to need to keep track of the days not only for my sake but for the reader's.

Lastly, while I outline (you'll probably run into this issue if you're writing historical fiction like I am or if you don't know something.) I run into some kind of bump into road, whether it be that I don't know what they wore back then, what something is called, or whatever. I need to research. So at the end of my outline presentation I put a few slides dedicated to research info and notes. I add on as I go and I just put my thoughts on the board.

Well, I know this was short, but I hope it helps!

(for a different, but more in-depth version of outlining, please watch YouTuber Katytastic's video on outlining.)

(I use Apache Open Office's Presentation Program to make slides for each section and chapter and such.)

Camp NaNo Outlining: Characters

I am going to start doing these 'Camp NaNo Outlining' series blogs where I show you how I outline by outlining my April Camp NaNoWriMo novel.

Now, this time I am using a method I have never used before, but it's for character outlining. It's where you ask your characters questions and you answer as him or her.

I will start out as the main character, Charles Jeremiah Issac Lee.

How old are you?
I am twenty-six years old. I will be turning twenty-seven in May.

What do you like to be called?



My slaves address me as Master Charles, but my friends and family call me Issac.

Do you fall in love? If so, who do you have a crush on, if anybody?



I wouldn't be one to fall in love. I don't speak to anyone much besides Jamie, but I feel that there's something there between us. Something I don't know if I should like or not.

Would you call yourself a nice guy?

I would. I treat my slaves with mild respect. I mean, they do my work after all.

Do you have a religion?


Yes, I am a devout Catholic.

And now it's time to meet Jamie Elizabeth Monroe, Issac's best friend and lover-to-be. :D

How old are you?

I am twenty-one. I'll be turning twenty-two in July.

What do you like to be called?

Jamie. I don't talk to my father's slaves (besides Dolly) and everyone calls me Jamie. No one really knows my full name.

Do you fall in love? If so, who do you have a crush on, if anybody?

I would probably be the last one to say that I fall in love rather quickly--but a lot of people wouldn't agree. But, to answer your question, I do fall in love. And I'd had a big crush on Issac for some time now.

Would you call yourself a nice girl?

I don't like to label myself anything. I let others decide what kind of person I am.

Do you have a religion?

I am a loose Catholic. The idea of 'God' doesn't appeal to me much, but I would one day like to see all of my dead relatives.

And that's how I am going to be analyzing my character's personalities. I will may have a few screen shots up later on of my outlining process.

Sunday, March 3, 2013

Book Covers: Mine and My Thoughts

Book covers can either make or break a reading relationship. I am one who will only read a book if I like the cover, and I normally only read hardcover books.

I, personally, only like covers that don't give away too much of the main character's appearance. I don't enjoy illustrated covers, and I mainly enjoy covers that actually relate to the book.

Here are two of my book covers:

























This one is the cover for Perfect World, and it's one of my favorites. It was made by someone on this creative writing site I get on called Mibba. As far as I know, I gave her the base image and then she went to work in Adobe Photoshop and made it.



















This is one I made myself.. I used gimp to add the text (I used the color picker to get the colors) and I softened it up a bit to let the text blend in. I then turned to a photo editing software like picnic, called picmonkey. There I used an effect to make it look like a painting (which I thought made it look like the sky) and I did this after messing with some of the visual changed. I can't quite remember what I did.

Well, that's my thoughts and some of my covers. Have a nice day.

Monday, February 25, 2013

Praise for Perfect World

Praise for Perfect World.


I cried tears of joy because of how much people are loving my story. ♥

Editing: How To & Process

I am going to edit the first 2 chapters of Perfect World tonight and I  figure that I might as well just go ahead and make a blog post about it.

I start of editing by going through the chapter with spell check and grammar check. If you use Microsoft Word then all you have to do is click the book that wither has an x or a check-mark and it takes you to your mistakes. I go through and correct everything with that as I write, which helps a lot because I can find if I accidentally used singular instead of plural or something along those lines.

After that, I read through and correct everything I want. If I find a sentence that doesn't quite make sense, or something else like so: "Yeah," he said. "we need to be careful." that the Grammar Checker doesn't get then I will correct those too.

After that, I read through again and revise/rewrite all of the parts that I think I can write better and then I edit what I revised/rewrote.

Then I read through again and make sure everything is in working order, no plot-holes or anything and I have all of my world-building facts right and character names and such.

And then I'm done!

Thursday, February 21, 2013

Writing Tips from Me

Here I shall just list some writing tips you can have from me and then talk a little about each tip.

1. Write a lot. I don't know how much I've heard someone say, "Ooh, I don't have time to write." Well, that's simple, make time. I  started writing when I was 7, but I didn't get good at it until the summer of 2012, where I wrote a story called Feed which got a lot of positive reviews on a creative writing site I got on at the time, but now, since I've written about 18 stories and I've finished one book since then, I can say that I am publishing worthy.

2. Finish your work. I am a bit of a hypocrite here because I NEVER finish anything I write. I  have only finished the first draft of one book, which is The Risen and I wrote it for NaNoWriMo 2012. Here's a list of stories I've just stopped writing to write something else:

I wrote a book called Blackout about zombies in the 7th grade, last year, and I planned to write a sequel but I sucked at writing at the moment, though I finished it at 15,000 words and about 18 chapters. I stopped writing the sequel to Blackout, which I had named Whiteout to start a lousy series called The Seven Sanctums, which was seven books in one series. I wrote 9,000 words and 8 chapters of the first book and then quit for another zombie trilogy called The Quarantine Trilogy. I finished the first book of that at 20,000 words and about 20 chapters but I never edited or anything. Then I quit that to write another trilogy which I called The Exile Trilogy. I wrote the first chapter of the first book and then stopped, waiting a few weeks before starting up on Feed, which was a vampire story. I got to 17,000 words and chapter 20-something and then I just stopped. Then I started up on a story about aliens called Banshee, which I got to 7,000-8,000 words and then deleted it. I then started a story called Survive, which I wrote to about 9,000 words and then quit for a while (I will come back to that later). Then I wrote 9,000 words and 7 chapters of a story I was told to write called From the Ashes We have Risen. I then stopped writing that for some mystical reason and then wrote a short 10,000 word story called Ancient World, I finished the first draft of that and never edited. I wrote a Hunger Games fan fiction that was called The Runner  at first, but I later changed the title to Surviving the Games  and then I wrote 6,000-10,000 words and just stopped. Then about a month later I started a two-part thriller called Righteous and Vicious. I wrote the first chapter of each, which they kind of counter each other. Vicious is about a murderer and Righteous is about a cop trying to solve the crime. Then I just stopped that to pick up Survive where I left off and didn't really go anywhere, while I wrote a story called The Fall of Troy about a kid named Troy who is bullied to death. I think I wrote about the first 1,000 words and decided against it because I couldn't connect because I have never been bullied much. After that I opened a story called Kidnapped and I wrote the first 2,000 words to it and stopped. After that I picked back up on Feed for a moment then I turned to The Risen which I finished at barley over 50,000 words then I shut it away (the manuscript is right beside me). Then I started back up on The Seven Sanctums, which I actually got to the fourth chapter at 9,000 words and clever thorough outlining and then I stopped to open The Exile Trilogy again and write The Ice Queen, which is the first book in that series. I stopped The Ice Queen for a couple weeks to work on Survive, which I restarted and got to 11,000 and put on halt again recently to write The Ice Queen again, which is in progress.

As you can see by that long-winded explanation, I absolutely cannot finish a book at all.

3. Read. I don't read a lot of books, because I'm really slow, but I read more than the average person (which nowadays is just more than a book your teacher tells you to read). I've read a couple books this year, mostly Adult, some are The Da Vinci Code by Dan Brown, Dreamcatcher and Full Dark, No Stars and I am reading 11/22/63 by Stephen King, A Tale of Two Cities by Charles Dickens, and White Horse by Alex Adams. There's only one thing to be said about this;

"If you want to be like the greats, you gotta read the greats."

4. Enjoy your writing. If you write and you're like me, while you're in the process of typing out those words your mind is like, "Oh my god this is so amazing I can't even fanboy/fangirl enough about this." BUT (yes, there is a but), once you read over it, even if you're not done writing, you're mind is suddenly like, "How could I have written this atrocity?! START AGAIN." You have to fight those urges to start all over on a clean slate, you get nowhere by erasing all of your progress. Just remember that instead of erasing you can just edit your work.

5.Lastly, let others enjoy your writing. You can't know what you're doing wrong if people don't tell you. This is a big issue in my life because I let people read my work and they don't give serious feedback. They say, "Oh it's amazing I really like it..." but they never go into detail about what they like about it and they never have anything relatively 'negative' to say about it. If there's one thing I know about getting better at writing, it's that (purely as a way to get better and improve) a writer wants negative reviews on their books or stories. Now, I'm not talking a review like, "Omg this sucked plz write a new version of the book it was horrible and i am disgusted." I'm talking something like, "This was a novel I wasn't very pleased to read. It didn't come to my expectations because I thought that [insert critique of story element here] and that you could just [insert suggestion here] but overall I think that the story needed a bit more [description/back-story/explanation/character development,etc]

That's all I have for today!

Wednesday, February 20, 2013

Factors of a Great Novel

I don't do much writing tips, so here I shall just steal 5-6 writing tips from someone else.

Videos by Katytastic on Youtube.

Saturday, February 16, 2013

A Blog About Literature

Hello guys! how have you been without me? Did you miss me?

Here, since I'vent updated anything since my last blog, I'm just going to dedicate this blog to my writing and reading.

So, let's start of with my reading in case you don't want to hear my narcissism.

I'm currently reading:

The Red Pyramid, Rick Riordan. My thoughts: I really enjoy all of Rick Riordan's books. He is such a fantastic author. But the Kane Chronicles is by far the best of all of his series, I think.

11/22/63, Stephen King. My thoughts: I love Stephen King, I even call myself 'the future Stephen King' just to prove my enjoyment of him and my passion for writing. This one is about the assassination of a president, I think. I'm not very far in it--only chapter two. It's amazing so far.

Now, time for my writing! :D

New Project: Indigo. This is about 3 kids and 3 ghosts. The ghosts are Abigail Smith, a 1st lady, I forget his name, but he was someone who was against abolishing slavery during the Civil War because he didn't believe in abolishing things, and president Nixon. As they go throughout the story, the 3 ghosts lead the kids to several battle sites across America and uncover a sting of deceit committed by the American government. So far I have about 2.5K words.

Perfect World. I'm not sure if I've told you about this, but it's kind of a long concept, so I'm just going to assume I have. I am at 4K words and I have finished chapter 2, working on 3.

The Ice Queen. I don't know if you know this, but in late January I took a break from it. Now I'm starting it back up again. I am currently at 11K words, and working on chapter four.

thanks, bye.

Saturday, January 12, 2013

Writer's Block + January TBR

So, in the past four days I have only written 776 words. I think I have a case of writer's block--I really wanna write but I can't. I've just been sitting/laying on my bed, browsing Facebook or YouTube. I want to try and reopen Revolt or Safety--one of the two seems like it needs to be finished... now.

I don't know.

Here's my January To Be Read:

1 - Daughter of Smoke & Bone, by Lani Taylor. I read more than half of this book the day I got it and now I have about 150/400-something pages left.

2 - Days of Blood & Starlight, by Lani Taylor. This is the seaquel to the book above, and I must say that the covers of both are utterly stunning.

peace, bitches.

Wednesday, January 2, 2013

My Resolutions!

Here, I present to you, an abrupt blog about my four resolutions.

1. I want to finish the Exile trilogy. I have a good feel for this one and I am working on the first book in the series. It just seems like this can bee the start of my career as an author.

2. I want to get published. If I get through with the Exile trilogy then I want it published. Yesss.

3. I need a girlfriend. Plain and simple, being alone kinda sucks. And not just a girl who dates me just to date me and we break up a week later, I want a serious girlfriend. I haven't had one since 6th grade.

4. I seriously need to sleep more. I only got 4 hours of sleep last night and I can't keep this up.

Feel free to tell me your resolutions!

peace.